Getting on the Same Page as Him

A very basic scene outline for my main NaNo chap. Also my first attempt at real plotting. *ish scared* 


Scene: The death of Dajun Lin (Lin's father)



Setting: Shibuya Airport, Shibuya Memorial Hospital



Basic Sypnopsis:



1) Lin gets word that his parents are on their way to Japan from China, and will be arriving in a few hours time to visit Lin and his injured brothers. Lin becomes frustrated- he doesn't want to see his dad. The two had a fallung out when Lin was much younger, and have never recovered from the event.



2) Dajun and Lotus board their filight to Shibuya Japan.



3) Madoka comes to visit Lin, who is in a great deal of pain from the car wreck. The doctor tells Lin that he'll have to stay at the hospital for observation rather than be discharged as was intended. Madoka opts to stay at the hospital rather than be discharged so she can stay with Lin.



4) Lin is seemingly unnerved about something. Concerned, Madoka asks Lin to tell her what is bothering him. Seeing no reason not to, Lin explains his relationship with his father to her. Madoka expresses worry that Lin will have to see his father soon.



5) Not long after, Lin's parents arrive at the airport. On the way down the stairs from the plane, Dajun's leg twists and he falls, furthering injuring his leg in the process. Paramedics are called and Dajun is escorted to the hospital.



6) During the ride in the ambulance, Lotus calls Lin, informing him that her and Dajun were in Japan, and on their way to the hospital. She also informs Lin that his father had been injured. Surprised, Lin asks her if she had sensed anything supernatural when Dajun fell. Lotus admits to feeling as though they were being watched, but had pushed the concern off as being worried about being in a foreign place. Not being in a position to object, Lin accepts the answer.



7) Dajun and Lotus arrive at the hospital. A doctor diagnoses Dajun with a sprained ancle, and tells him that he'll be kept at the hospital for a day or two before the swelling goes down.



8) Madoka tells Lin that he needs to check in on his dad, if not but for a minute. Lin refuses, telling her that he would go and see him when he was ready. Madoka realizes how much effort it was taking Lin to keep his composure as she could sense the stress he normally was able to hide. She agrees to let the matter rest until Lin was ready to address it.



9) Dajun wakes up in his hospital bed and sees a figure standing above him. Its the rogue shiki, Kanon. Kanon uses his powers to silence the machines designed to alert on-duty nurses and doctors to changes in their patient's conditions. Kanon threatens to kill Dajun if he opens his mouth to call for help. Terrified and injured, Dajun remains silent.



10) Despite Dajun following directions, Kanon is not in a forgiving mood. Dajun has wandered into the wrong territory, and had to pay the price. In order to futher his revenge against Lin, Kanon tortures Dajun with his various powers, to the point that Dajun is near death.



11) Lin, finally deciding to go and visit his father while the pain medications had them both more relaxed than normal, arrives just as Kanon is dealing the final blow on Dajun, who passes away.

12) Lin finally sees Kanon for the first time. Kanon, realizing that he had been spotted, flees the hospital. Once he has left the vicinity, the spell that kept the alarms from alerting the nurses beeps loudly. Lin recognizes the alarm that signals that a patient has flatlined.



13) Lin's strength leaves him and he slides down the wall, finally breaking down and crying. Madoka, hearing the alarm, tears out of her room and finds Lin. She realizes what happened due to heairng the nurses talking about it. She slides down the wall next to Lin and comforts him as he finally completely loses his composure.